Monday, October 12, 2009

Sentence 4

His sentence: The goat would die in the end, if we left it-there was no cure for Madam Octa's bite-but we shall finish it quickly.

From Cirque Du Freak by Darren Shan

The set of dashes interrupts the thought to explain what is going on; why the goat would die.

My sentence: We thought we would never get out-the haunted house was a maze-but we finally found our way to the much-anticipated end.

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