His sentence: They were funny-looking people: long hair, strange clothes, weighed down with fancy earrings and bracelets.
From The Vampire's Assistant by Darren Shan
In this sentence, a colon is used to start a list of adjectives that described the subject of the first clause.
My sentence: They were incredibly creepy: dark blue cloaks, hidden faces, never talked.
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