His sentence: I cleaned up their tent and rolled up their hammocks-they all slept in hammocks.
From The Vampire's Assistant by Darren Shan
The hyphen connects two independent clauses in which the second clause clarifies the first one.
My sentence: She quietly slid out her window and took off running, not stopping until she reached the hill-the friends always met at the top of the hill.
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