His sentence: But ordinary humans...I could rip them apart in a second.
From The Vampire's Assistant by Darren Shan
The series of periods is used to show the writer's pause in thought in order to put emphasis on the following clause.
My sentence: But my brother...I wanted to rip his head off.
Monday, October 12, 2009
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